Reflection on my Magazine Article
In the last few weeks we were doing a project on culture relating to a cultural book, which we were reading. I chose the story “the Serpents children” by Laurence Yep and I wanted to display my understanding of the story in connection to the author in a fiction story. While I was researching about Laurence Yep it always said that all his books are about outsider or so called aliens. Therefore, I thought I would write a story about real aliens. However, I started off as a story, but then I found it hard to put a lot of information in a science fiction story. At the end I had magazine article which was supposed to be a story. To make the project fid its format, I then formatted it into a magazine article, which turned out really good.
In my opinion, my project was a success. Even if I was not that proud at the beginning for my article it turned out really good when I transformed it into a magazine article. Form this project I learned that there will be always outsiders. In the beginning of my magazine I said that the earth was almost one big country because everybody was excepting each other, but then the aliens came and suddenly there was difference again. In conclusion, there will always be outsiders, but people have to except each other and can learn from each other.
hi dear Maximilian 🙂
Welcome to Edublogs Challenge.
I will be your Mentor in this 10 weeks challenge and I hope your blog with your tries become candidate to one of the best blogs in this challenge.
Actually your blog is perfect and with most of the required options in it. I road many posts and I liked more from Field Trip to Hei Shui, because as a movie director I think discovering new lands and new cultures is needed to every one. About this post It shows you could be a successful publisher in future. Publishing our thoughts and … is a very important and also very sensitive job.
in this challenge, weekly program in challenge will be announced in http://www.studentchallenge.edublogs.org.
As you know first of all we should make a page (About Me) that there isn’t in your blog.
Because the visitors who read your posts are interested to know about you, your interests and…
But please don’t publish personal info that is not needed to share in public.
Also it would be so helpful if you visit other student’s blogs in this challenge and leave them your comment with your blog address.
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Take good care
Astaneh
hi dear Maximilian 🙂
Welcome to Edublogs Challenge.
I will be your Mentor in this 10 weeks challenge and I hope your blog with your tries become candidate to one of the best blogs in this challenge.
Actually your blog is perfect and with most of the required options in it. I road many posts and I liked more from Field Trip to Hei Shui, because as a movie director I think discovering new lands and new cultures is needed to every one. About this post It shows you could be a successful publisher in future. Publishing our thoughts and … is a very important and also very sensitive job.
in this challenge, weekly program in challenge will be announced in http://www.studentchallenge.edublogs.org.
As you know first of all we should make a page (About Me) that there isn’t in your blog.
Because the visitors who read your posts are interested to know about you, your interests and…
But please don’t publish personal info that is not needed to share in public.
Also it would be so helpful if you visit other student’s blogs in this challenge and leave them your comment with your blog address.
If there is any question about challenge or blogging you could write me via E-mail TEC.TTC@gmail.com.
Take good care
Astaneh
Your blog post has some reflection on your assessment task, Max, showing the way in which your final text changed as you worked on it. This is a great way to show the learning, which was as much about how best to demonstrate your understanding as it was about the understanding itself.